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I'm going down,
In a sea of thoughts I drown.
I've been here before
But I don't know how to get out anymore
What's the way to follow,
I know you once said
What's the way to go
Before I end up dead

It isn't me
A person I don't want to be
I will take a bow
And oh I know what's gonna happen now
What's the way to follow,
I know you once said
What's the way to go
Before I end up dead

Save me, save me
I don't know what to do
But I know what's gonna happen
And I don't want it to
Someone out there
Can you hear my cry
I cant to stop it from happening
Oh I try and try

What's the way to follow,
I know you once said
What's the way to go
Before I end up dead
This is kinda how I feel, because well I feel like its getting bad again.
This is also kinda inspired by 'in all my dreams I drown' from the devil's carnivalr.
I hope you all like it.
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Litlle-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
It's sad and beautiful, I like it. And it reminds me so things
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isasongs Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks, sorry for you but glad you like it
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Litlle-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
I'd like to write as well as you
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isasongs Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's so nice of you to say!
But trust me, you could write so much better ;)
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Litlle-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
I don't know, I'm french so it's difficult for me to write really well in English... But I will find a way to improve my English ! :)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is say read a lot, I'm dutch and my English is pretty good (even if I say so myself) :P
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Litlle-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
OK thanks, you've given me courage ! :)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Don't be scared, I think my stuff sucks a lot of the time. But to me it's not about that, it's about me letting my feelings out and helpen people connect, you know, so they know they're not the only one who feels a certain way.
I don't even think while I'm writing I just write my feelings down, and afterwards i read it.
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ssensory Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student Writer
I really like this. I love the chorus of it, too. Really packed a punch of emotions.
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isasongs Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much
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