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I'm fine,
I lied,
can't you see it in my eyes.

Won't cave,
not safe,
I'm really not that brave.

Hold everything in,
Bleed it all out.
won't let anybody in,
I'm covered by a cloud.
I know I've become undone,
Can I ever overcome?

I cry,
I lie,
No one ever asks me why.

In fear,
too near,
take a step away from here.

Hold everything in,
Bleed it all out.
won't let anybody in,
I'm covered by a cloud.
I know I've become undone,
Can I ever overcome?

Don't get to close to me,
My walls are up too high.
I'll never let you in,
So please don't even try,
you'll only make me cry,
and searching for the knife.

Hold everything in,
Bleed it all out.
won't let anybody in,
I'm covered by a cloud.
I know I've become undone,
Can I ever overcome?
Wrote this in the moment, if you can relate to it, you'll understand what I mean.
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SonicVelocity Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love the idea of this as well as the rhyme scheme. I can totally imagine this as a song! :D
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, glad you like it.
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QuillScribbles Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this, I can totally relate! :hug: hang in there!
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! you too
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Sillycactus18 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
When I picture your songs with music to them, I always think they'd sound good if Rise Against sang them ^^
(huge compliment cuz I love Rise Against)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, and even tho I don't listen to them very often, who doesn't love them :P
And that's always a huge compliment :D
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Sillycactus18 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ikr? Haha.
And good :3
Hmm... Ithink I'm gonna go listen to them now xD
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