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It made me break my rules again
Some time I was fine but then
With no warning but fast as light
I was taken over, there was no chance to fight

I know I should stop
I know I'm doing wrong
But something in my mind it tells me
Just keep going on

It made me break my rules agsin
Some time I was fine but then
With no warning but fast as light
I was taken over, there was no chance to fight

Then I fall back down
But never in too deep
I make it out just long enough
To catch a little sleep

It made me break my rules agsin
Some time I was fine but then
With no warning but fast as light
I was taken over, there was no chance to fight

You can read my story
But it's not in a book
It's right there, you can find it
If you know where to look
So this is what happens when I get an eating-kick.. You know eating everything that comes on my path. It makes me feel bad and do other things. And I wrote this just now about this.
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Katragoness Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is wonderful. I like how it's ambiguous as to what you're driven to do. It makes it relatable on many different levels. :)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks you.
I'm glad you can relate to it, that's always what i go for.
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Katragoness Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
mission accomplished!
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littlerecklessheart Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
I really like it, you're great.
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I appreciate that
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littlerecklessheart Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
You're welcome. :)
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