Would you notice?
Would you care
would you feel alone
If I were no longer there?
Should be searching
Could I find
A road to follow
To get some peace of mind.
Take me home,
lead the way,
without a word to say.
Follow the moon,
or the sun.
Will I ever come,
to a place where I belong.
Could you tell me,
who to be.
just who is this girl
I'm on lock and there's no key.
I feel alone,
I feel lost.
Will I stay like this,
Forever, always last.
Take me home,
lead the way,
without a word to say.
Follow the moon,
or the sun.
Will I ever come,
to a place where I belong.
Trying so hard to be someone I'm not,
I'm slowly forgetting who I was.
And I'm forgetting who I am,
I just don't understand.
Take me home,
lead the way,
without a word to say.
Follow the moon,
or the sun.
Will I ever come,
to a place where I belong.
Take me there,
Take me home.
And also thanks for the fav.
However, there are some parts where the flow is interrupted. "without a word to say" just seems awkward. I believe it's the disproportionate syllable count (3 3 6 4 3 5 in the chorus). There are other parts where this occurs, but those are built up to a bit more. "I'm on lock and there's no key" doesn't have anything to do with the rest of the imagery- perhaps be more aware of lines like this.
It reminds me of someone I know.
Thank you for posting it