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Boy:
Didn't mean to make you storm out that door
I don't even remember why I started yelling, anymore

Girl:
Every time I leave, I want to turn right around
But I'm afraid that when I do, you're no longer in that house

Both or just girl:
You try to chase me away
But just a little later, you're begging me to stay/

Both:
I don't want this to be over
Don't want to grow apart
We never would've thought that we'd be here, in the start
I don't want to leave you
But don't know what to say
Cause staying's getting harder every day

Girl:
When I am without you, i feel so alone
I guess it's just so comfortable, you make me feel like home

Boy:
Evey time I'm with you, you make me feel alive
But at the same time you're making it hard to survive

Both:
I really want you near me now
And I want to love you but I don't know how

Both:
I don't want this to be over
Don't want to grow apart
We never would've thought that we'd be here, in the start
I don't want to leave you
But don't know what to say
Cause staying's getting harder every day

Girl or boy:
Didn't want to make you storm out that door
But we both know it's better that you won't be back anymore
This is a duet I wrote yesterday when I was watching Nashville (that show inspires me a lot!).
I've kinda divided the lyrics between the male and female, but I'm not sure yet.
I am curious what you guys think of it, since this kind of lyrics and duets are pretty new to me. Lately I'm trying to write again, but not all depressing like a year ago. I'm still learning, but I do feel this is a pretty good one.
What do you guys think?
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Mephisto-Myrddin Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i think it's a wonderful song, i love that it is a duet ... and it really reminds me of my own situation at the moment, thank you for those words.
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isasongs Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. Yeah I'm kinda just going on what I see in movies etc. Because I've never actually been in this situation. So I really like it that you can connect to it. Thank you so much!
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Mephisto-Myrddin Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you'Re welcome ... really? I would have thought you know the situation, it is really close to life.
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isasongs Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I guess I tend to get quite emotional. I just really feel the emotions in other movies/series/songs etc. So maybe that's why it worked
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Mephisto-Myrddin Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah, maybe ... :D I always lack the right words for that ...
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isasongs Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:P
I don't know, I haven't really been in these kind of situations, but I guess I just can imagine it? I don't know :P
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Mephisto-Myrddin Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe, yeah ... however, it's great. :D
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isasongs Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks again:P
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