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Deepest cut so far,
drawn another scar.

My sister sits downstairs,
I wonder if she cares.

Keep quiet to hold the lie,
to hold it all inside.
let it come out in red.
I won't tell if you won't ask,
I'll keep wearing my mask.

Laugh and play along,
I know I'm doing wrong.

Talking with my friends,
they'd never understand.

Keep quiet to hold the lie,
to hold it all inside.
let it come out in red.
I won't tell if you won't ask,
I'll keep wearing my mask.

Falling to the floor,
make it go deeper.
I cut because I hate myself,
I hate because I cut.

Keep quiet to hold the lie,
to hold it all inside.
let it come out in red.
I won't tell if you won't ask,
I'll keep wearing my mask.

Deepest cut so far,
drawn another scar.
Very emotional
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Litlle-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
Sad but beautiful, I love it :)
I especially like these line :
"I won't tell if you won't ask,
I'll keep wearing my mask."
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isasongs Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much.
I tend to write really emotional, so at that time it all turned out pretty dark :P
But I'm glad you like it.
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Caylee-Slansen Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful! It really speaks to me
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isasongs Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
Glad you like it, also thanks for the badge :D
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Caylee-Slansen Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem :D
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punk0000 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist
very nice job on this :heart:
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you like it :D
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punk0000 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist
mhm :)
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TheArtistOfWords Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is very good. I see nothing that needs work besides one or two grammar mistakes, but I'm not part of the grammar police, so it's fine. Its very moving, and very emotional.
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. :)
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