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My little razor friend
you always understand
you never let me down
you always help me out

My little red sin
that's coming from within
that helps me work things out
never am i without

My monster in my soul
in my hart digging a hole
my mind inside it blurs
I am forever hers

My invisible wall
closed for one and all
building higher to the sky
and no one wonders why

My one single tear
that shows when no one's near
forever just for me
no one will ever see

All of you have been
only seen within
and never will I doubt
will you ever get out
Well, this is something new I've put some more work into.
I hope you all like it
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Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's very interesting; I liked it. I like how it's so open to interpretation, it can mean so many things to different people.

Btw; you kinda misspelled 'heart'. :)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
And I just saw the word I misspelled, must have been something in my mind that said: let's write this the dutch way. :P
Thanks for telling me, I'Il change it when I'm back on my computer.
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Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! It happens. I mix up english and spanish grammar all the time. I guess that's the occasional downside of knowing more than one language. :XD:
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I just do it automatically :P
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Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha! Me too! :lol:
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Writer
You need a hug?
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thats ok :P
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littlerecklessheart Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
It's amazing. I can relate to it.
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, and I'm sorry for you
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littlerecklessheart Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
it's ok & you're welcome. :)
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Kinglorshi Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Writer
First I thought this was about murder or something, but this is a rather nice piece. I like how it wasn't so direct and so obvious from the start. I know the title said "little friends" but it can be taken certain ways.

Melancholic but subtle so that it got my attention. I read it more than once as well. Nice piece! :)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Now because you say it the beginning kind of reminds me of my friends in Sweeney Todd. Hadn't even noticed that :P
But thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Kinglorshi Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome. :)
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The first four lines gave me the chills.
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, thanks. that's a big compliment for me.
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ShadowedIrises Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know these feelings all too well.
Stay strong! :hug:
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, and sorry for you...
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