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I am broken,
glued together by cuts
I stay frozen
I'll never change much.

My blank look
Looks right through it all
My fake smile
that keeps up my wall

A part of me wants to be free
a side of me cannot see
to the questions in my mind
the answers are nowhere to find
In my mind, in my mind, in my mind
I won't find.

I don't know
I lost how I feel
Reflection
Please show me what's real

You can't hide
from what is inside
so just try
try to make it right

A part of me wants to be free
a side of me cannot see
to the questions in my mind
the answers are nowhere to find
In my mind, in my mind, in my mind
I won't find.

You won't save me so I run, I try to hide.
I should try but I don't know if I can win this fight.

A part of me wants to be free
a side of me cannot see
to the questions in my mind
the answers are nowhere to find
In my mind, in my mind, in my mind
I won't find.
I was thinking of making this a soft song at first, but in my mind I hear this as a kind of classic-rock song. That's my favorite genre :P
Hope you guys like it
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:iconblazejulianightfury:
BlazeJuliaNightfury Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student Writer
This is absolutely amazing!! I love it!!! Keep up the amazing work! ;)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THANKS!! :D
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BlazeJuliaNightfury Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student Writer
no problem :)
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punk0000 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist
very nice :)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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punk0000 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist
welcomes ^-^
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ALLsoLiT Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Professional Writer
:petting: it's ok doll you'll get through it. :petting:
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RIOWICHI Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
I don't know if I could find anything else that could describe my current situation
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isasongs Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you like it, sorry for you tho.
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RIOWICHI Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
Yeah it's a bit complicated and I have to say for a guy who isn't really moved much, this made me cry..in a good way :)
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