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November 21, 2012
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Tell me it's just a phase
not knowing who I am
But it's been much more than days
and I still don't understand

I feel like I am wrong
I never do it right
Oh I'm really not that strong
I don't think I'll win the fight.

Build a wall, standing tall
can't you hear my call

Pieces of my heart breaking down down down
Everytime the world is spinning round round round
Can anybody see
The pain inside of me
Or do you all enjoy just watching me bleed

The wall I'm building high
it's raising everytime
everytime I want to cry
when you make me hurt inside

Build a wall, standing tall
can't you hear my call

Pieces of my heart breaking down down down
Everytime the world is spinning round round round
Can anybody see
The pain inside of me
Or do you all enjoy just watching me bleed

Stop making me feel like this
stop making me feel so low
is it so hard to miss
really don't you know?
I'm this because of you
and even though you knew
there's nothing I can do

Build a wall, standing tall
can't you hear my call

Pieces of my heart breaking down down down
Everytime the world is spinning round round round
Can anybody see
The pain inside of me
Or do you all enjoy just watching me bleed
Just wrote this, it's rough, but tell me what you think
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name-unkown Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
Well written, I like it. :)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! And also for the fav.
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SmartSong1 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think is the most awesome song I have ever sing. I compare myself a lot with that song. It's about your life?
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isasongs Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I always write about how I feel in the moment. At that moment this was how I felt. Right now I'm doing much better ;)
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Suchimupanku Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like it, and think it's better than anything I could ever write, but I'm not really stable right now I guess, so I'll just avoid trying to critique anything.
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isasongs Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, and that's ok :p
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Suchimupanku Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome :P
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