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I want to fly away,
up, in the sky.
down, back to earth.
I want
I want to go.
Away, anywhere, nowhere, somewhere.
Just go,
Leave, let go, live.
I want to fly away,
somewhere I can stay.
My thoughts at this moment
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Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love it! So very easy to relate to. Actually, I've written something along this line of thought as well. I love your choice of words, so emotive, and it has a nice flow. :)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, glad you like it.
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Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :)
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littlerecklessheart Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
It's amazing.
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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littlerecklessheart Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
You're welcome :)
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know the feeling!!
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry for you...
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empty-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
really relevant - this is lovely! :)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! Also for the fav.
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jacktdartnz Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
touching
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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CecilyRoseMidnight Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You just put my most common feeling into words. I think this is pretty, good job. :)
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:iconisasongs:
isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you can connect to it, thanks
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CecilyRoseMidnight Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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WinglessFlutters Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel the same way often. In Fact, I wrote a poem kind of like yours. Anyway, you have a way with words :)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks
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nldarkstripe Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
oh my gosh.... THIS IS AMAZING! all of my poetry sucks....

compared to this :)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really really thank you. :P
And I'm sure that is not true
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nldarkstripe Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
hahaha you dont want to read my poetry XD
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